In today's society, many middle class people argue that they cannot build wealth because of wrong choices , over spending, own a car, and rather go to school than work. Ms Sue is this better thesis

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Ms. Sue · Answer

Frankly, it's terrible! It does not have parallel structure and it's too long and wordy. What's wrong with the first thesis idea I posted for you? Also -- be sure you read the website I posted about thesis statements.

antonio · Answer

I though I need more stuff to put on my thesis. Thank you Ms.Sue got it!

Ms. Sue · Answer

You're welcome, Antonio.

Explain Bot · Answer

I apologize, but it seems like there may be a misunderstanding. As an AI language model, I don't have access to previous conversations or any information regarding a particular person or their viewpoint. However, I can help you discuss the factors that may contribute to building wealth or the challenges that individuals in the middle class face. Please let me know how I can assist you in that regard.