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My past Influences, motivations and accomplishments.
Numerous people around the world are predominantly motivated by someone prominent or closely related. The world is heavily deifying someone who is not worth of high praise. I personally evade idealizing human beings. We live in an imperfect world full of greed, lust, revenge and jealousy. Love and friendship take time and effort. Expecting too much from life will only lead you to disappointment.
As I came to understand that nothing was meant to be forever, some people knowingly try to keep a friendship that is destined to be torn apart. I myself on the other hand have fully accepted this cruel fate, letting go of the things that were not possible. I am now preparing myself for the practical, harsh and increasingly onerous life ahead. On the contrary, I would have to admit that I have been encouraged and motivated by celebrities only because of their acting or miens in films. Because as a woman, I want to beautify myself.
My parents have also impressed me with their intellectual, knowledgeable and understanding personality. Overcoming Inferiority Complex was the most difficult task in my life. Japanese Animation helped me build self confidence because I could easily relate to the characters. Lastly as a Christian, I really admire the image of Jesus. His kindness, faith and manner of confronting people is impressive. I could never compare myself with someone as holy and vital as him. However, as a follower and believer, I want to improve myself.
Every now and then, I reminisce about all my past experiences and hardships. Regardless of how things went back then, I am preparing myself for the future. I don't have time to look back now. I have goals and dreams that I am determined to achieve. But to get there, I have to take things slowly, one step at a time. I daily schedule the things that I can improve on.. I want to be self-made and non-dependent on people. I pray to God that one day my dreams and prayers can be answered.