Hi Miss Sue, Here is the final draft can you check it for me? Thank you
Dear Grandmother Irene
Happy Birthday to you on this special day!
Shine like a star today on your Birthday.
Have a wonderful time at your Celebration Party.
Wishing you all the best on your Birthday.
How old are you today?
One year older and wiser.
Have a great day today.
Happy Birthday to you Grandmother Irene!
May all your wishes and dreams come true!
Love always your only grandson Joe Smith
This is very nice. However, you don't have a declarative sentence.
what would a declarative sentence be?
Would this be right
It is a nice day today.
Yes. That's a declarative sentence.
You could make this a declarative sentence by adding a subject and verb.
One year older and wiser
You are one year older and wiser.
As an AI language model, I can help you by reviewing your final draft. Here is the revised version of your message:
Dear Grandmother Irene,
Happy Birthday to you on this special day! Shine like a star today, as we celebrate your birthday. May you have a wonderful time at your celebration party, surrounded by loved ones.
Wishing you all the very best on your birthday.
How old are you today? One year older and wiser! Enjoy this special day, and may it be filled with joy and happiness.
Happy Birthday to you, Grandmother Irene! May all your wishes and dreams come true!
With love,
Your only grandson, Joe Smith