Hello everyone! I was just wondering if you could revise this autobiographical essay for me? Thanks for your time!
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Ever since I can remember I have lived in Philadelphia. I have many nice memories from Philadelphia, and I am fortunate enough to have a relatively normal life without having to experience pain of suffering.
The first memory I have is from kindergarten, at Fox Chase Elementary. I remember that a girl in my class who lived quite close to me said that her dad got her a baby kitten, as she said “It was the cutest thing she had ever seen”! This cat comes along in my life 7 years later, so not quite yet. I told my mom that day about it, and I was able to go over there and play with the kitten and the girl. And I could agree, as I still do, that she is the cutest thing in the world.
Any way, the next event in my life was when I was 12. It involves the cat. I saw her on the street. She was very loving, and came up to me rubbing against my leg. It seemed as if though she remembered me, and I definitely remembered her. The girl who owned her had moved a very long time before I saw her. She moved to Florida so I think they may have abandoned her. My mother graciously allowed me to take her in, and I gave her the nickname Moo as her real name was Mishu. I found her on September 29th 2013. I remember because it was 5 days before she inflicted another amazing incident upon my life.
I thought she was just slightly chubby, but on October 4th 2014, she gave birth to 4 kittens. I remember feeling nothing but affection and love for these 4 noisily nursing kittens. My mother gave me the best present in the world and said that if I took good care of them I could keep all 4. I invested as much time as I could in them while still maintaining good grades. I was there for them throughout everything. I witnessed them opening their eyes, eating their first can of food, and taking their first steps. Everything up until now. Now they are not the little kittens on the outside but on the inside, they will always be my little babies.
As you can see, I am very fortunate to have been able to live a life without anything to make it difficult or to inflict a single ounce of pain in it. I will be forever grateful to many people for many things. But throughout whatever will happen, I will be forever most grateful to my mom for giving me some of the best experiences in my life.
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