english is not my first language ,plz help
i m writing an essay ..
In order to prevent the risk factor of social media, parents should involve in children social media and other online issues. .Parent should win the confidence of their children and encourage them tell immediately if they being cyber bullied harassment, and stalking. Parents should encourage their kids to seek other extracurricular activates to keep them away from social media sites and promote inner strength, feeling of special and safety. Teach children not give their personal information o stranger, and don’t reply to harass phone calls and text messages but can but keep messages as evidence order to get help.
If anyone rewrote this for you, your teacher would know instantly that it's not your work.
Take each sentence separately and make sure you have the subject and verb correctly matching (singular/singular or plural/plural), as well as singular or plural nouns and pronouns where they're needed, clarifying which noun each pronoun refers to, etc.
I'll get you started.
In order to prevent problems caused by social media, parents should be involved in all their children's online activities.
Now it's your turn. How will you revise that second sentence so it makes sense?
Parent should win the confidence of their children and encourage them to tell immediately if they are being bullied ,harass, and stalking.
Only one parent?
Make sure all three verbs at the end of the sentence are in the past tense.
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Parent should win the confidence of their children and encourage them to tell immediately if they are being bullied ,harassed, and staled.
1. Only one parent still?
2. Check the spelling of the last word.