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Please do know how to rewrite this sentence
It is not reasonable and it is not all right that gay individuals need to live in panic
Also my introduction needs to be more argumentative
How many people would be affected if gay marriage was legalized? Yes! Of course, obsoletely no one would be affected if gay marriage was legalized
I need a stronger thesis
Please help me

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    It it unreasonable for gay individuals to live in a state of panic.

    Thesis? I am wondering if you have written your essay..thesis statement is what your essay developed points to prove.

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