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There is a shelf on the wall. He seems to use it as a bookshelf. On the shelf, there are two books. We can say he enjoys reading books. A basketball is on his uniform. We can see the top T-shirt and the bottom trunk. He seems to enjoy playing basketball. Write 'enjoy playing basketball' in the second blank. A guitar is leaning against the wall. He loves playing the guitar, I think. There is a camera on the bed. Some photos are besides it. So he enjoys taking pictures. Complete the three blanks looking at the photo on the left.
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Would you check the passage above? Thank you.

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Who is "He"?

We can see his T-shirt and trunks. (Including top and bottom is repetitive.)

Connect the two clauses at "So" -- these two should be all one sentence.

Everything else is fine.

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