In a Forbes magazine article from October 2013 Susan Adams wrote of a survey done by the National Association of Colleges and Employers from Bethlehem, Pa. From early August to mid-September that year they asked 200 hiring managers what skills they prioritize when they hire college grads.

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I know something is not quite right with this sentence.

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1. There are two sentences there. Which do you need to fix ... or do you need to fix both?

2. The entire first sentence contains information that should go into a Works Cited or Bibliography.

3. The first sentence should become a brief citation at the end of the second sentence, which is the one with the actual idea in it.

Based on your request, it seems like you need help in identifying and fixing the issue with the given sentence. Upon reviewing the sentence, there doesn't seem to be any apparent grammatical errors. However, one possible improvement could be made to enhance clarity and readability. Here's a revised version of the sentence:

In an October 2013 Forbes magazine article, Susan Adams discussed the findings of a survey conducted by the National Association of Colleges and Employers in Bethlehem, PA. The survey, conducted from early August to mid-September of that year, involved 200 hiring managers who were asked about the skills they prioritize when hiring college graduates.

With these changes, the sentence becomes more organized and easier to understand. Let me know if you need any further assistance!