Hook: "When words fail, music speaks"

Thesis: My favorite thing to do is listen to music.

What could I make my transition sentence?

DON'T start any paper's first draft by writing the introduction! How can you introduce a paper that you haven't written yet?

Follow the writing process, whether you're writing a paragraph, an essay, or a research paper … for science, history, English, or whatever:

Prewriting: Brainstorm, research, plan, outline, thesis statement

Writing: Write first draft by starting with section II of your outline; write the introduction after the body of the paper is written; write the conclusion last.

Polishing: Revise, concentrating first on the body of the paper, then the intro, then the concl (revision = making sure ideas are logical and sequential and support your thesis); proofread (spelling, grammar, usage, etc.)

Do you have a thesis yet? Have you done your brainstorming (and maybe research) yet? Have you written an outline?

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PS -- What you are calling a thesis isn't a real thesis. Please work on that.

To create a smooth transition from the hook and thesis statement, you could use something along the lines of:

"Given that words sometimes fall short, it comes as no surprise that my favorite activity that truly connects with my emotions and provides solace is immersing myself in the captivating world of music."