Thesis Statement

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“The subject of this paper is my experience with teaching elementary school children”

Is this a weak or strong thesis statement

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    Weak, because you should mention specifically what is it about your experience with teaching children that you want to write about.

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    It's not even a thesis statement.

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    Read the linked page Writeacher provided for me in the post titled "Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)" below. It most certainly should be able to help you.

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