Is this sentence written properly?
"Think about it," Link began, "Didn't you realize how much trash there was as the water came?"
No.
You need a period at the end of the sentence -- after "began".
"Well," Poseidon began. "Since they are young, I will give them one more chance."
Is this one right?
Yes.
"Sire! Sire!" The servants busted through the door.
I am suppose to capitalize "The" right?
And are my quotations correct?
Thank you so much ms.sue
Yes, you're right.
However, "busted" is slang and not a legitimate word.