ENGLISH (ESL)

posted by .

please need proof Reading


Health promotion means what you can do to reduce the health risks and promote the wellness of a human being. This process directed towards enabling people to take action and support them in changing their lifestyle to move toward a state of optimal health. Health promotion includes health education, supportive environment, linkage and health promotion and health screening.

  • ENGLISH (ESL) -

    (sentence by sentence)

    "Health promotion" means actions that can reduce the health risks and promote the wellness of a human being.

    This process encourages and supports people to take action in changing their lifestyles to move toward a state of optimal health.

    Health promotion includes health education, supportive environment, and health screening.

    I removed "linkage" from the last sentence because it makes no sense unless you explain what you mean. If only the people in your class understand the term, then you should know that other people won't! Either supply a definition within the sentence somehow or delete it.

    I removed "health promotion" toward the end of your last sentence because it's repetitive and makes no sense.

  • ENGLISH (ESL) -

    i got it thanks.

  • ENGLISH (ESL) -

    As more A.p get awareness of activities that lead to good health and become knowledgeable about his health status, as a result the overall health of the patient will improve.

    IS THIS SENTENCE IS CORRECT.
    A.P IS NAME OF A PERSON.

  • ENGLISH (ESL) -

    No that sentence is not correct. I can't even get past the first 8 or 10 words!!

    If A.P. is a substitute for someone's name, how can "As more" make sense?

    Let me know how you'd correct those first 8 words or so, and I'll check it again.

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. health and personal wellness

    Possessing meaning in life and being driven by personal values describes which area of wellness?
  2. Health

    Please, I just need someone to help me start this and I'll take it from there. I can't seem to come up with any concepts. Thanks. Imagine you are witnessing a senate debate in Washington, D.C., hours before a vote on a comprehensive …
  3. health and disease

    How do Health promotion and wellness programs assist in decreasing chronic illness
  4. Healthcare

    I need some help with a list ofidentifying the major components of health communication. Who is involved in each component?
  5. Health Care

    Compose a list identifying the major components of health communications. Who is involved in each componet?
  6. health

    Compose a list in which you identify the major components of health communication. Who is involved in each component?
  7. health

    Compose a list in which you identify the major components of health communication. Who is involved in each component?
  8. Health

    4. Below are 4 of the 6 components of health. Which one means that you strive to live in peace with yourself and others around you?
  9. Health

    Explain five personal characteristics or life situations that promote good fitness, health, and wellness. Include in your answer reasons that support these as being beneficial to lifetime fitness.
  10. PE

    Your life expectancy can be related to the overall well-being of your body, your mind, and your relationships with other people. (true ***) or false Which side of the health triangle corresponds to having loving relationships with …

More Similar Questions