Business Communications - English 101

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Please check numbers, dates, and commas, etc. for any grammatical errors. Thank you!

On January 2 of next year, Great Lakes Associates in Radiology and Imaging will be relocating to a new, larger office complex. The move is necessary to accommodate the expansion of our services which will now include magnetic resonance imaging (MRI) equipment. As you know, this technology is extremely useful in diagnosing cancer and other tumors and masses of the soft tissues.

The new office will be located at 28513 Euclid Avenue, Cleveland, Ohio, 44092. Our name and our phone number will remain the same. Two new doctors will be added to our staff. Dr. LaToya Lynn and
Dr. Jeffery Jasper will be working primarily with the MRI technology.

Great Lakes Associates in Radiology and Imaging is dedicated to providing the best possible service to our doctors and patients; and for the convenience of your patients, an announcement of our relocation is enclosed. To help make the transition to our new address easy, please photocopy and distribute the announcement to your patients as they are referred to our new office.

A convenient location, the most recent technology, the best radiologists—three good reasons to let Great Lakes Associates in Radiology and Imaging serve you in 2013.

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    Ohio, 44092 >> omit comma

    ; and for the convenience >> omit and

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    Thank you so much!

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    You're very welcome.

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