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Correct the errors in these quotations. I Have this homework, I don't know if I'm in the right track...

1."This is the hardest class I've ever taken. It's also the most rewarding. The teacher sets the bar high and I think that forces us to learn more," said Joe Smith, a senior, of Journalism 201.
Correct: "This is the hardest class I've ever taken, and it is also the most rewarding. The teacher sets the bar high and I think that forces us to learn more," said Joe Smith, a journalism.
2.Gretchon Davies, a senior communications studies major, is taking three online courses this semester while she works full time. "I couldn't possibly attend three classes in person every week."
Correct: Gretchon Davies, a senior communications studies major, is taking three online courses this semester while she works full time. I couldn't possibly attend three classes in person every week.
3.University College said it will begin offering journalism classes online this fall.
Correct: University College said, “It will begin offering journalism classes online this fall.”
4. Marty Jennings, a senior, feels University College should offer all of its courses online.
Correct: Marty Jennings, a senior, feels University College should offer all of its courses online.

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    1 and 2. I believe you left something out of your corrections.

    3. Wrong. To whom does "It" refer in your correction?

    4. I don't see any difference between the original and your correction.

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