Wir auf einer Reise. Am Sonntag, wir fliegen. Am Montag, wir Fotos machen. Am Dienstag, wir Reise(n?) nach Frankfurt. Am Mittwoch, wir Frankfurt kennenlernen. Am Donnerstag wir packen. Am Freitag, wir fliegen nach Amerika.

does this look good? i wrote it all myself and would like for someone to check it for me. thank you!

Wir sind auf einer Reise.

wir reisen, not Reisen

Aside from the awkward present tense, it looks ok. Hang in there.

thanks, steve :)

..wir machen Fotos.

So many commas would probably not be used.

could you please guide me from where should I start learning German Language and its prunciation from scratch

Yes, your sentences are mostly correct! However, there are a few grammar errors that need to be corrected:

Here is the corrected version:
"Wir sind auf einer Reise. Am Sonntag fliegen wir. Am Montag machen wir Fotos. Am Dienstag reisen wir nach Frankfurt. Am Mittwoch lernen wir Frankfurt kennen. Am Donnerstag packen wir. Am Freitag fliegen wir nach Amerika."

In the corrected version, the main changes are:
- "wir fliegen" instead of "wir fliegem" (conjugated verb "fliegen" with "wir" plural pronoun).
- "nach Frankfurt" instead of "Reise(n?) nach Frankfurt" (the verb "reisen" is not needed, we can just use "nach" to indicate traveling to a place).
- "kennenlernen" instead of "Frankfurt kennenlernen" (the verb "kennenlernen" is a separable verb, so we need to separate "kennen" and "lernen").
- "wir packen" instead of "packen" (add the pronoun "wir" to indicate "we pack").

Overall, good job on writing the sentences yourself! Just make sure to double-check the grammar and verb conjugations.