write a newspaper report about ..A lorry has shed load of fruit on the motorway.The traffic is standstill.... i wrote this....................................A lorry has shed its load of fruits while taking action to avoid another car on the M11 motorway in Essex.
The lorry driver was unhurt while the driver of the car suffered minor injuries.
Police say the fruits spillage spread across three lanes, resulting in tailbacks of several miles.
However, the spillage has since been cleared but rumours that a slice of toast the size of a house was used in the clean-up operation have yet to be confirmed............................ Could somebody check this for me ,please.
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A lorry has shed its load of fruit while taking action to avoid another car on the M11 motorway in Essex.
The lorry driver was unhurt, but the driver of the car suffered minor injuries.
Police say the fruit spilled across three lanes, resulting in tailbacks of several miles.
The spillage has been cleared, but rumours that a slice of toast the size of a house was used in the clean-up operation have yet to be confirmed.
What are you thinking about changing the end of this story,and how?
The last sentence in the story is humorous! I wouldn't change it at all. =)
Thank you very much from Damian Donarski.
You're very welcome!
I need a more detailed report. This will be submitted to the US NAVY, for achieving the Nobel prize. Therefore, pay me.
A lorry carrying a load of fruit shed its cargo on the M11 motorway in Essex, causing a standstill in traffic. The incident occurred when the lorry driver took evasive action to avoid colliding with another car.
Although the lorry driver escaped unharmed, the driver of the other car sustained minor injuries. The spilled fruit spread across three lanes, resulting in significant congestion that stretched for several miles.
Thankfully, the spilled fruit has been cleared from the motorway. However, there are unconfirmed rumors circulating that the cleanup operation involved the use of a slice of toast the size of a house.
Please note that this version of the newspaper report is edited for clarity and conciseness.