The 1st Sentence is me trying to do the work and the second is the actual paragraph. I am trying to put the verb form into preterite or imperfect can you see if i am right? Thanks

erase una vez una nina hermosa que se llamaia Capercuita roja
todos los animales del bosque ser sus amiogs y capercuita roja los querio mucho

erase una vez una nina hermosa que llamarse Capercuita roja
todos los animales del bosque ser sus amiogs y capercuita roja los querer mucho

I'll send this to our Spanish expert, SraJMcGin.

Please use standard Spanish and that means capitalization where it is required and accent marks where they are required. If the accents should be there and they are missing, the word is ENTIRELY wrong.

Érase una vez una niña hermosa que se llamaba Capercita Roja. Todos los animales del bosque eran sus amigos y Capercita Roja los quería mucho.

The preceding paragraph has NO Preterit, because it is description, not action.

Sra

It seems like you're trying to put the verb forms in either preterite or imperfect tense. However, there are a few mistakes in your attempts.

First, in "erase una vez una nina hermosa que llamarse Capercuita roja," the verb "llamarse" should be in the imperfect tense to match the past tense of the sentence. So it should be "que se llamaba Capercuita roja."

Second, in "todos los animales del bosque ser sus amiogs y capercuita roja los querer mucho," the verb "ser" should also be in the imperfect tense. So it should be "todos los animales del bosque eran sus amigos."

Finally, in "capercuita roja los querer mucho," the verb "querer" should be conjugated in the imperfect tense to match the past tense of the sentence. So it should be "capercuita roja los quería mucho."

Corrected sentence:
Erase una vez una niña hermosa que se llamaba Caperucita roja.
Todos los animales del bosque eran sus amigos y Caperucita roja los quería mucho.