so Ms.Sue, can you help me with my last sentence of intro about what three arguments. I am going to talk about in my body paragraphs.
What else do you think makes Brave New World an ideal society?
science and technology
There is total social stability, there is almost no disease, very low crime, high rates of happiness and acceptance of death.
OK. That gives you the points for the rest of your essay.
How do you reconcile the pleasure of the savage with this utopia?
yeah but how doi make this sentence into a better sentence for the endof my into like the three main points I will be discussing. How do I end my intro??
We r not allowed to us first person.
Religion is non-existent and present simultaneously in the form of preconditioning and technology, social classes are used for defining individual purpose and harmony among citizens, and drug use is the backbone for provoking happiness.
Would that be a good sentence?
This is a good sentence to end your introduction and introduce the rest of your paper.
There is total social stability, there is almost no disease, very low crime, high rates of happiness and acceptance of death.
To get rid of the "there is" construction -- how about?
Total stability, almost no disease, little crime, and acceptance of death produce high rates of happiness.
Now group your main ideas into three main points.
Of course, I'd be happy to help you with your last sentence of the introduction!
To effectively craft your last sentence in the introduction, you'll need to summarize the three arguments that you will be discussing in your body paragraphs. Here's a simple step-by-step guide to help you:
1. Review your body paragraphs: Take a look at the main points you will be discussing in each of your body paragraphs. What are the three key arguments or ideas that you will be exploring? Make sure you have a clear understanding of what each argument entails.
2. Identify the main points: Determine the main points or ideas behind each argument. These are typically the key reasons or evidence that support your overall thesis statement.
3. Condense your arguments: Find a concise way to summarize each argument into a single sentence. Ensure that you capture the essence of each point without going into too much detail.
4. Combine the sentences: Combine the three sentences into one cohesive sentence that encapsulates all three arguments. Be mindful of the flow and coherence of the final sentence.
5. Edit and revise: Read the sentence aloud and make sure it flows smoothly. Check for any grammar or punctuation errors. Revise if necessary to make it as clear and concise as possible.
Remember, your last sentence in the introduction should provide a preview of the main arguments you will discuss in your body paragraphs while maintaining a coherent and engaging flow. Good luck!