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how can i reword this sentence differently and better?

it sounds wrong to me.

In conclusion, The Scarlet Letter is a transcendentalist novel of the strength of individual character.

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    It doesn't make sense to me. In every day words, what do you want to say?

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    i want to say that the novel is a transcendentalist story of the strength of individual character

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    How about?

    The Scarlet Letter is a transcendentalist novel about the strength of a woman's character.

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    If you use "about" instead of "of" your sentence will read better.

    It's still pretty hazy, but a bit better.

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    Aha! Ms. Sue got it!!

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    thank you both! :)

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