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Ohio Sen. Rob Portman is the first Republican senator to endorse same-sex marriage. Portman changed his views on same-sex marriage once he learned his son is gay.
" I want all my children, including my son to have the happiness in marriage that I have with my wife," Portman says.This shows that a personal experience can outweigh something that was once ideological. If Portman had stuck with his initial stance on same-sex marriage he would have had to tell his own son that he could not be married. But instead, Portman changed his mind and now wants his son to have equal opportunity to be married.


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