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My 5th grade year was coming to a close and I, personally, was really looking forward to summer. Two months of sleeping in late and doing whatever.

How would I write this...

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Delete the word 'personally.' It's redundant.

Then make the fragment (2nd group of words) into a complete sentence.

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