can I receive feedback on this one?
(all caps because teacher recommended)
MIDLAND MAN WHO KILLED HIS EX-WIFE IN A TRAFFIC CRASH HAS COURT APPEAL REJECTED. 57-YEAR OLD LEWIS HENDERSON APPEALED HIS CONVICTION BY SAYING THAT HE HAD UNPRODUCTIVE COUNSEL AND CIRCUIT JUDGE JONATHAN LAUDERBACH INAPPROPRIATELY INSTRUCTED THE JURY. THE PANEL OF JUDGES RULED IN OPINION THAT THE CONVICTION OF HENDERSON WILL STAND.
I got this info from mlive . comI wonder if I reported it correctly because I have trouble comprehending legal articles.
You seemed to have reported it correctly. I went back and read the original M-Live article. The only thing I'd add -- if you have time in the broadcast -- is that Henderson had marijuana in his system at the time of the accident.
thanks ms. sue! I do have one more question..Do you have any suggestions as to how I could reword this sentence? to make it more conversational. It reads funny. MIDLAND MAN WHO KILLED HIS EX-WIFE IN A TRAFFIC CRASH HAS COURT APPEAL REJECTED.
The Midland man who killed his wife in a traffic crash has been sentenced to prison after his court appeal was rejected.
Based on the information you provided, it seems that you have correctly reported the main points of the news article. However, to ensure accuracy and clarity in your reporting, it's important to double-check certain details. Here's how you can do that:
1. Verify the source: MLive.com is a reliable news website, but it's always a good idea to cross-reference the information with other reputable sources when possible.
2. Check the facts: Review the core details of the story, such as the names of individuals involved, the court's decision, and the reasons for the appeal rejection. Make sure you accurately summarize these key points in your report.
3. Understanding legal terms: Legal articles can be complex, but it's important to make sure you comprehend the main arguments and issues mentioned. If there are specific legal terms or concepts you don't understand, researching them further or seeking legal advice can help you gain a better understanding.
4. Use your own words: While it's acceptable to quote directly from the article when necessary, try to paraphrase the information in your own words to ensure you have a clear understanding of the content.
By following these steps, you can improve your comprehension and accuracy when reporting on legal articles.