can you give me a developed simile and metaphor please.
Simile: You are as lazy as a sloth.
Metaphor: She is a sloth.
http://grammar.about.com/od/words/a/similemetaphor1.htm
now a good alliteration
http://examples.yourdictionary.com/alliteration-examples.html
Simile:Her eyes are as blue as the sky.
Metaphor:Her eyes are blue.
How is that??or do you need more examples?
Your metaphor is not a metaphor -- shuffler. It doesn't compare any two objects.
Of course! Here are a developed simile and metaphor:
1. Simile:
She was as graceful as a swan gliding across the water.
Explanation: A simile is a figure of speech that directly compares two things using "like" or "as." In this case, the simile compares the gracefulness of a person to the elegance of a swan moving smoothly on water.
2. Metaphor:
His words were a soothing balm for her wounded heart.
Explanation: A metaphor is a figure of speech that describes an object or action in a way that isn't literally true, but suggests a resemblance. In this example, the metaphor compares the effect of someone's comforting words to the healing properties of a balm on an injured heart.
When creating a simile or metaphor, it helps to consider the qualities or characteristics of the objects you want to compare, and find a way to connect them in a meaningful way.