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I'm writing a story about a boy who wakes up after dying, and he is trapped in the passageway between heaven & hell. When he wakes, he has no memory of what happened. So... When you wake up in a hospital, what are some of the first things you experience/think of?

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    What happened? Where am I? Why do I hurt?

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