I need to re-write a poem into a free verse, but I'm not very good at poems. This is what I have to re-write:
We saw the months of wicked weather,
As day to painful night did turn,
Waiting, huddled close together
For the frozen sun's return
This is what I have, but I don't know if it's right:
Wicked winds and storms have passed,
The days are cold but the nights are blood freezing,
We huddle on to life and warmth in the cold
Waiting for the warmth and glory the sun brings
It's good. I made my own.
We saw bad weather,
As the sun set,
We grouped to get warm,
And waited for the sun to dawn.
Thank you!
Don't Cheat! I saw this. and this is a test!! I just did it...!!!!!!!!
To re-write a poem into free verse, you have creative freedom to experiment with structure, rhythm, and imagery. Here's a revised version of your poem:
Amidst months of tempestuous turmoil,
As day surrendered to agonizing night,
We stood united, seeking solace
In the frozen embrace of celestial respite.
Ardent winds and tempests long gone,
Frigid days and chilling nights prevail,
Yet, together, we clasp onto life's flicker,
Yearning for the sun's warm touch to unveil.
In this version, I attempted to maintain the essence of your original poem while transforming it into free verse. I focused on using descriptive language and imagery to evoke a sense of anticipation, unity, and the power of nature's contrasts. Remember, free verse prioritizes self-expression and personal interpretation, so feel free to further modify or experiment with the poem as you see fit.