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I have difficulty restating my thesis in a different way in my conclusion.
my thesis: Ruby's sense of responsibility becomes her weaknesses as it makes her blind to the fact that her decision to stay with a man that maltreats her is wrong. For this, she develops a habit of smoking which leads to her downfall.
i have tried to restate this thesis but it didn't work.
pls help.

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