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ms. sue for essay i be writing i got everything done about real life traditions now i just need few more from story on this topic

Wat expense be paid by beings & by society 4 their unhesitating approval of tradition or brutal social rituals. Do there be rituals that have outlasted their initial usefulness or be retained 4 the wrong motives?

i don't think i focus on second part of that ^ for story, just first part right? the things i get are the expense paid be death, traumatization, community damage, men rule over women so lottery be continued, women not have say. i don't know what else i add from story to give more examples.

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    Yes, the first part of the question focuses on the story. I can't think of anything to add to your examples from the story.

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    thanks very much ms. sue :) so the examples i got, i just use those? i not get what quote to use for the men rule over women one.

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    ms. sue i also just need help coming up with title.

    i thought of something like bad human nature, but i not able to think of something better.

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    There are many quotes that show that men rule over women -- but you probably need to write several of them to make your point.

    "Bobby and Harry Jones and Dickie Delacroix . . . made a great pile of stones . . . The girls stood aside . . ."

    "Soon the men began to gather."

    "The women . . . came shortly after their menfolk."

    "Soon the women, standing by their husbands . . ."

    "The lotter was conducted -- as were the square dances, the teen club, the Halloween program -- by Mr. Summers.
    . . . his wife was a scold."

    "Don't you have a grown boy to do it for you, Janey? . . ."

    "Guess I gotta fill in for the old man this year."

    "Glad to see your mother's got a man to do it."

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    Titles?

    The Village Without a Soul

    Evil Lives On

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    thanks very much ms. sue :) and i like the title evil lives on, thanks very much :)

    "it isn't fair, it isn't right," Mrs. Hutchinson screamed, and then they were upon her.

    ^^ that quote be used for death?

    The children had stones already, and someone gave little Davy Hutchinson a few pebbles.

    ^^ that be for traumatization little kids?

    i also not know what quote to use for community damage.

    Also Ms. sue for another example do i mention anyting about the ritual not being followed in the exact same way, like they take out chanting parts, and use paper slips instead of wooden slips.

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    You're very welcome, Mohammad.

    The whole theme is about community damage. Perhaps you could use this quote: "Old Man Warner was saying, 'Come on, come on, everyone.'"

    You might use that information about the ritual not being followed in the same way.

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    thanks very much ms. sue :) for hook how i grab someone attention?

    It be gross. It be cruel. It shouldnt be done...? Tradition should be followed in most positive way and not cause harm.

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    That's good!

    It is gross! It is cruel! It shouldn't be done!

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    thanks very much ms. sue for all your help :)

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    You're very welcome, Mohammad.

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