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I couldn’t help but to think: “Is this really what the meaning of success has become?” and to make matters even worse, this idea was just spread to the thousands of viewers.

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    I couldn't help but think, "Is this really what the meaning of success has become?" And to make matters even worse, this idea was just spread to thousands of viewers.

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