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does this sound write and look grammatically correct? Please and thank you(nohbdy is suppose to be spelled that way)
Odysseus was brave from the rest of the crew so he led us into fooling Cyclops. He gave some wine to Cyclops to get him drunk. Then Odysseus, me, and a couple of the crew members stabbed Cyclops in the eye. Also, Cyclops asked Odysseus who are you and he replied,” I’m Nohbdy.” So when the other Cyclops’ came to help Cyclops he said,” Nohbdy ruined me!”

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    Odysseus was brave from the rest of the crew<~~I don't know what that's supposed to mean so he led us into fooling Cyclops. He gave some wine to Cyclops to get him drunk. Then Odysseus, a couple of the crew members, and I stabbed Cyclops in the eye. Also, Cyclops asked Odysseus, "Who are you?" Odysseus replied, "I’m Nohbdy.” So when the other Cyclops’<~~?? what does the Cyclops possess? came to help Cyclops<~~comma needed here he said, ”Nohbdy ruined me!”

    Cyclops = singular
    Cyclopes = plural

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    Odysseus was BRAVER THAN the rest of the crew [I'm assuming this is what you meant] so he led us TO FOOL Cyclops. He gave some wine to Cyclops to get him drunk. Then Odysseus, a couple of the crew, and *I* stabbed Cyclops in the eye. Also [perhaps THEN or synonyms would be a better word to use here], Cyclops asked Odysseus who he was and he replied, "I'm Nohbdy." so when the other cyclopes came to help Cyclops, [<-insert comma] he said, "Nohbdy ruined me!"

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