thanks ms. sue for help with questions witht that story but i still need some help with few questions.

it ask why the story be written in present tense? and is it good choice made by writer?

The present tense brings an immediacy to the reader. He feels like the story is happening now.

I think it was a good choice.

thanks very much ms. sue :) it be good choice because you get to experience the mans emotions in this tense better?

Right. :-)

thanks very much ms sue :)

I also not get in what sense protagonist is on stage.

and in this para

In spite of his car, he hopes his day old beard which he strokes upward
with the heel of his hand, will, when combined with his clothes, provide
immunity. He slips his wallet into his shirt pocket, does up the metal buttons on his jacket and slips a ten dollar bill into his back pocket. Recalling a television show, he decides that if he is accosted, he will say that the ten is all he’s got, that he stole the car, and ask them if they know a buyer.

what kind of immunity he think about i not get. and why he ready to tell false story? because he don't want to get killed or just scared?

Yes, he's scared and doesn't want to be robbed or killed.

He hopes he'll get immunity from violence by blending in and looking like the others in this place.

thanks very much ms. sue :)

also I not get this

Ahead, there is a small store with windows covered in hand painted signs
and vertical metal bars. On the edge of the light, three young men and a girl
slouch. One of them has a beard and, in spite of the advancing darkness, wears
sunglasses. He has on a fringed leather vest. His companions wear leather
jackets. Their peaked caps make their heads seem flat, their foreheads nonexistent. The girl is better looking than she should be for such companions. She is long legged and wears a white turtle-necked sweater that accentuates her breasts.

in this para

why there be bars on window? what main guy think about girl.what this reveal about his character?

well main guy think that girl should not be hanging around those criminals but i not get what reveal this about h im.

also in this para

Faced with this, he decides to call the next time he sees a store or phone
booth. So intent is he upon the future that he dangerously ignores the present
and does not notice the police car, concealed in the shadows of a side street, nose out and follow him.

how he unaware of present?

why there be bars on window? what main guy think about girl.what this reveal about his character?

well main guy think that girl should not be hanging around those criminals but i not get what reveal this about him.

The bars on the windows show that the owners of the store are protecting it from robbers. His attitude toward the girl seems to be revealing that he thinks in stereotypes. Everyone in this neighborhood should be unattractive because they are poor and probably criminals. But she's attractive and doesn't fit his stereotype picture.

Faced with this, he decides to call the next time he sees a store or phone
booth. So intent is he upon the future that he dangerously ignores the present
and does not notice the police car, concealed in the shadows of a side street, nose out and follow him.

how he unaware of present?

He's not aware of the present because he's thinking ahead about finding a phone to call his wife. He's afraid of her anger because he's late.

Thanks very very much ms. sue :D

You're very welcome, Mohammad. :-)

To determine why the story is written in the present tense and evaluate whether it is a good choice made by the writer, we need to analyze the purpose and effect of using the present tense in storytelling.

1. Identifying the Purpose:
The writer might have chosen the present tense for various reasons, including:
- Creating immediacy and a sense of being in the moment: Present tense narration can make the story feel more immediate and engaging. It allows readers to experience events as they unfold, as if they are happening in real-time.
- Enhancing suspense and tension: Present tense narration can heighten the suspense in a story, as it maintains an ongoing sense of urgency and anticipation.
- Portraying subjective experiences: Present tense can be particularly effective when the story delves into the character's thoughts, feelings, and perceptions. The reader can experience these moments alongside the character, intensifying the emotional impact.

2. Evaluating the Choice:
Whether using the present tense is a good choice depends on how effectively it serves the story. Here are some points to consider:
- Consistency: Is the present tense consistently maintained throughout the entire story? Abrupt shifts between present and past tense may confuse readers.
- Engaging storytelling: Does the present tense enhance the reader's immersion in the story and maintain their interest? Or does it distract from the content and feel forced?
- Narrative style: Is the present tense a stylistic choice that aligns with the writer's intention and the tone of the story? Does it add depth to the narrative or detract from it?

Consider these factors when evaluating the choice of present tense in the story. By analyzing the purpose and effect, you can arrive at a more informed opinion on whether it is a good choice made by the writer.