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I need to correct the following sentence and I havving trouble with it!
This is how it is written and there is to be 6 corrections at least in it.

out no loitering screamed grubble the greedy shopkeeper

This is how I think it should be am I right??? "Out!" "No loitering", screamed Grubble, the gready shopkeeper.

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