posted by Dawn .
I need to correct the following sentence and I havving trouble with it!
This is how it is written and there is to be 6 corrections at least in it.
out no loitering screamed grubble the greedy shopkeeper
This is how I think it should be am I right??? "Out!" "No loitering", screamed Grubble, the gready shopkeeper.
It's right -- except for this change.