English Thesis Statement
posted by Sahil .
Critique my thesis please?
Sartre uses the ideas he lays out in “Self-Deception” in his short story “The Wall” to establish the connection between bad faith and living toward death, and to reject the Freudian notion of the unconscious in favor of the idea that individuals have complete conscious access to the genesis of and reasons for all actions, though they may choose to ignore this knowledge.
WAAAAAAYYYY too long!
What's the central idea you want to convince others of?
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