So, if I spend about 5-6 minutes planning what else would I write except for a couple of bullet points about my two main examples? Would it just be this:
ex1: _____
-something
-something
ex2: _____
-something
-something
Is that it?
Also, I think I need help as Mr. Pursley indicated earlier, in sentence structure. I have never been an amazing English or writing student- so any sort of website or even basic tips on how to condense my writing would really help. Thank you both so much.
You need to end up with a minimum of 4 paragraphs, 5 would be better:
1. Intro -- about 4 sentences; 4th sentence is your thesis statement
2. Full paragraph (7-8 sentences) developing one of your main points
3. Full paragraph (7-8 sentences) developing one of your main points
4. Concl -- about 4 sentences, echoing your conclusion and making your final point.
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Go here: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/
Go into the Essay and Research Paper section and read the section called STRUCTURAL CONSIDERATIONS. Read all the other parts, too, if you can.
When it comes to planning your writing, spending 5-6 minutes to brainstorm and organize your thoughts is a good approach. However, simply having a couple of bullet points for your main examples might not be enough to develop your ideas fully. Here's a suggestion for a more comprehensive planning outline:
Introduction:
- Briefly introduce the topic or issue you will be discussing.
- Provide some context or background information.
Body:
- Start with a clear thesis statement that outlines your main argument.
- Introduce your first example (ex1) and provide a brief summary.
- Support your example with specific details, evidence, or personal experiences.
- Utilize topic sentences for each paragraph to help structure your writing.
- Expand on each bullet point by explaining further or providing additional details.
- Transition smoothly between paragraphs and ideas.
Conclusion:
- Summarize the main points you have discussed in your essay.
- Reinforce your thesis statement and main argument.
- Offer a closing thought or reflection on the topic.
Regarding sentence structure and condensing your writing, here are some basic tips:
1. Use varied sentence structures: Mix short and long sentences to create a natural flow and avoid monotony.
2. Avoid excessive wordiness: Get rid of unnecessary words or phrases that don't add meaningful content to your writing.
3. Be concise: Get straight to the point and use clear, direct language to express your ideas.
4. Use active voice: Passive voice can make sentences longer and more complex. Using active voice can make your writing clearer and more concise.
5. Use transitions: Utilize transition words and phrases to create logical connections between sentences and paragraphs.
6. Proofread and revise: After writing your initial draft, take the time to review and revise your work. Look for opportunities to condense your writing by eliminating repetitions or rephrasing sentences.
As for resources to improve your writing skills, there are many websites that offer tips and guides on sentence structure, grammar, and overall writing improvement. Some popular options include Purdue OWL (https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html) and Grammarly (https://www.grammarly.com/blog/). Additionally, you can find writing style guides or reference books that can help you with grammar and sentence construction.