I was wondering if you could tell me if my sentence structure using ":" and quotations is correct...
Furthermore, when Howard states: “If I had a spot, I'd slap you in” (54:14), and “everybody has to pull his own weight” (54:30), he uses the aggressive motions of slapping and pulling to emphasize his point.
OR should i structure it like this...
Furthermore, when Howard states, “If I had a spot, I'd slap you in” (54:14), and, “everybody has to pull his own weight” (54:30), he uses the aggressive motions of slapping and pulling to emphasize his point.
if I am wrong on both could you please tell me how. thank you!
#1 - DO NOT use a colon immediately after a verb.
#2 - What are those numbers in parentheses?