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13. He did not think the bicycles would make it over the mountains, being so old.

* The bicycles being so old .He did not thing it would make it over the mountains.
please check my dangling and misplaced modifiers

  • english -

    You're on the right track. Now proofread your sentence for typos.

    There's a much simpler way to get the modifier next to the word it modifies.

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