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Having a high school diploma is very important to my future. I will no longer feel ashamed, because I was never able to finish my schooling. I will be able to work towards getting the skill I need for the career I want. This will give me better confidence, that I no longer have to settle for jobs I am not suited for. Knowing that I can make my dreams become a reality . This will help me to better things for me and my family. By providing them with the guidance for a better future, financially and by my own personal example. Showing even if you failed the first time, always keep trying like I did by getting my high school diploma.

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    This will give me better confidence, that I no longer have to settle for jobs I am not suited for. >> run-on

    Knowing that I can make my dreams become a reality >> fragment

    This will help me to better things for me and my family. ???

    By providing them with the guidance for a better future, financially and by my own personal example. fragment

    Showing even if you failed the first time, always keep trying like I did by getting my high school diploma. >> unclear

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    I rewrote again, kind of changing a few things please let me know when I need to fix here.
    Having a high school diploma is very important to my future. I will no longer feel ashamed, because I was never able to finish my schooling. I will be able to work towards getting the skills I need for the career I want. I will have better confidence . No longer settling for jobs I am not suited for. Knowing that I can make my dreams become a reality to help me better things for me and my family. By providing my family with guidance for their own future . That you can succeed at anything even if I may have failed the first time.

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