(my English teacher's name)
Care of (my full name)
(school's address)
9/10/12
President Barack Obama
The White House
1600 Pennsylvania Avenue NW
Washington, DC 20500
Dear President Obama:
Hello my name is (my name). I'm doing this assignment for my English class when I have to write a business letter to a person - famous or not, so I choose you. I'm writing to you and your family is because you guys inspire me a lot.
Mr. Obama, you deserve to be President for the second term, that speech you gave was powerful, determination, bright, and creative. As for Michelle you speech was also powerful, determination, bright, and creative. You guys just love making a difference in this country and the world. When I grow up I want to become a social worker (to help teens with their problems; friendships, family issues, bullying, depression, romance, anything!), a author (I love to write) and an artist (I love art). I want to make a difference by helping teens to make good decisions in their life's, give them advice, and resolve their problems. I know today teens still make some bad decisions.
Would you guys spend the time writing me an autograph, if you guys have a chance.
Thank you so much for your consideration for this request. Malia I wish you good luck in high school and as for Sasha I hope you enjoy your years in middle school, trust me it's fun! Mr. Obama, my parents are defiantly voting for you! :)
Sincerely,
(my signature)
(my name)
Is it good?
Is there grammar mistakes?
Please check because I really want to get a good grade on this and plus my English teacher said that I can actually send it to Obama, so I want this to be perfect.
PS ---- PLEASE reply my 2 math posts, because no one replied it.
Calling the President and is family "guys" is disrespectful.
I'm writing to you and your family is because you guys inspire me a lot. >> Omit "is."
Mr. Obama, you deserve to be President for the second term, that speech you gave was powerful, determination, bright, and creative. >> Run on sentence
As for Michelle you speech was also powerful, determination, bright, and creative. Change "Michelle" to Mrs. Obama. Change "you" to your.
Mr. Obama, my parents are defiantly voting for you! :) defiantly or definitely??
one of them was a typo, sorry about that
and how on earth you guys is disrespectful...????? If I say you inspire me a lot I had to add you guys because I referring to the hole family... never mind I'll take it out then
but is my letter is good thought and be honest because I worked really hard on this
btw --- please reply my 2 math posts, thank you
PLUS --- is there anything else I should add???
Yes, it's a good letter. You should be proud to send it.
thank you! :)
I add another sentence for the third paragraph - Ms. Obama you lucky to have a wonderful husband. Keep up the good work! :)
please reply my math posts.
Dear (my name),
Thank you for sharing your letter to President Obama. I understand that you would like to know if there are any grammar mistakes and if it is good overall. I will be happy to assist you with that.
Here is a review of your letter with some suggestions for improvement:
Dear President Obama,
Hello, my name is (my name). I am writing this assignment for my English class, where I have to write a business letter to a person, famous or not. I chose you because you and your family inspire me a lot.
Mr. Obama, you deserve a second term as President. The speech you gave was powerful, determined, bright, and creative. Michelle, your speech was also powerful, determined, bright, and creative. You both make a significant difference in this country and the world. When I grow up, I want to become a social worker to help teenagers with their problems, such as friendships, family issues, bullying, depression, romance, and anything else they may face. I also aspire to be an author, as I love to write, and an artist, as I enjoy creating art. My goal is to make a difference by helping teenagers make good decisions, providing them with advice, and resolving their problems. I am aware that teenagers still make some bad decisions today.
If you and your family have the opportunity, would you kindly consider writing me an autograph? I would greatly appreciate it.
Thank you for your consideration of this request. Malia, I wish you good luck in high school, and Sasha, I hope you enjoy your time in middle school – it can be quite fun! Mr. Obama, my parents will definitely be voting for you! :)
Sincerely,
(signature)
(my name)
In terms of grammar, there were a few minor mistakes in your original letter. I have made some changes to make the letter sound more polished, but overall it is good.
As for your request to send the letter to President Obama, it is worth noting that it may not be possible to receive a response due to the high volume of mail the White House receives. However, it is still a meaningful exercise to express your thoughts and admiration for the former President and his family.
Regarding your request for help with math posts, as an AI text-based model, I do not have access to previous conversations or the ability to reply to math posts directly. However, I can certainly assist you with math-related questions or problems you have within the scope of my capabilities.
I hope this helps, and best of luck with your assignment!
Sincerely,
Explain Bot