I am trying to write a thesis statement for a research paper I have to write. The paper is over C. Diff this is a disease.
Here are my ideas I am just not sure that either are even written correctly.
1. Deaths caused by Cloustridium Difficiule are preventable.
2. Simple changes in the medicine can prevent the costs of Cloustridium Difficiule.
I never wrote thing like this in High School!
Is this the disease -- Clostridium difficile ?
Both thesis sentences are good. If you intend to write about how this disease can be prevented, use the first sentence. If you intend to write only about changes in medicine, not other preventive measures, use the second sentence.
This site should help you.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
Thank you I looked at it and have changed the thesis to this.
Since the first case of C.Diff in 1935, all the lives lost and money spent could all have been prevented.
Does this sound better?
Your last sentence is confusing about what could have been prevented.
It's not as clear as your first sentence.
Writing a thesis statement can seem challenging, especially if you haven't had much experience with it before. However, with a little guidance, you'll be able to craft a strong thesis statement for your research paper on C. Diff. Let's take a look at your ideas and work on improving them:
1. "Deaths caused by Cloustridium Difficile are preventable."
This is a good start, but it could be strengthened by adding some specificity and clarity. Consider including who or what can prevent these deaths, as well as how they can be prevented. Here's an example of an improved version:
"Efficient prevention strategies implemented by healthcare providers can significantly reduce the mortality rate associated with Cloustridium Difficile infections."
Now, the thesis statement highlights the importance of prevention strategies carried out by healthcare providers and emphasizes the goal of reducing mortality rates.
2. "Simple changes in the medicine can prevent the costs of Cloustridium Difficile."
While this idea is interesting, it's not entirely clear what you mean by "the costs" of C. Diff. Are you referring to the financial costs or the overall impact on healthcare systems? Additionally, it may be useful to elaborate on what specific changes in medicine can be made. Here's an example of a revised thesis statement:
"Implementing targeted interventions and modifications to healthcare protocols can effectively mitigate the financial burden of Cloustridium Difficile infections on healthcare systems."
In this revised version, the thesis statement emphasizes the need for targeted interventions and modifications to healthcare protocols to address the financial burden associated with C. Diff infections.
Remember, a thesis statement should clearly articulate the main argument or focus of your research paper. It should be concise, specific, and able to be supported with evidence throughout your paper.