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for my birthday, i asked for an MP3 player, but instead, my parents got me a telescope. the telescope was old and rusty, so I put it aside. when i finished dinner, I took the telescope with me to my room. i dusted and cleaned the telescope so i could look through it. when i looked through it, i could see a girl that looked just like me, but bigger. She was a doctor.............

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    What kind of doctor? What do you do? Does the work give you satisfaction? How?

    Also -- be sure you use appropriate capital letters.

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    It great

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