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for my birthday, i asked for an MP3 player, but instead, my parents got me a telescope. When I finished my dinner, I went in my room to try it out. When I looked through it, I could see a girl that looked just like me but bigger and older. for a moment, i sat down and thought. then i realized that the telescope tells my future.


(i sorta need help with my story)

  • writimg-please check -

    That's a great start. Now, imagine yourself in the future. Dream! :-) You may find the questions I asked in your earlier post helpful.

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