There are two ways of learning in terms of the mathod; one is a serious formal way, and the other is an entertaining enjoyable way. Both ways have merits and demerits. To a low-level students, an entertaining enjoyable way seems to be much better than a serious formal way. However, to a high-lever students, a serious formal way is even better than an entertaining enjoyable way. I prefer a serious formal way to an entertaining enjoyable way especially if the level of the students is high. There are the reasons for that.
First, when students are focused in class, they can learn a lot of things from teachers. Especially, when students have aims and they are motivated, they can learn a lot in a serious formal way.
Second, students should understand what the teacher says. So in a serious formal way of teaching, they can understand what the teacher says. However, in a entertaining enjoyable way, the situation is different. Though students feel enjoyable, students are usually talkative to participate in the activities. They can learn some facts in an enjoyable way, but they can not learn a lot.
Last, if students have to lean complicated subjects, they should concentrate the teaching. If some students make noises and the environment is not appropriate, the lesson will not be effective.
In conclusion, when students learn complicated field of study, they should learn in a serious formal way. Especially when they are motivated, they can learn more effectively than an entertaining enjoyable way.
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There are two different methods of learning: a serious formal way and an entertaining enjoyable way. Both methods have their own advantages and disadvantages. For lower-level students, an entertaining enjoyable way may seem more appealing than a serious formal way. However, for higher-level students, a serious formal way is often considered better. Personally, I prefer a serious formal way, especially for high-level students. Here are the reasons why:
Firstly, when students are focused in class and have clear goals and motivation, they can learn a lot from their teachers in a serious formal setting.
Secondly, it is important for students to understand what the teacher is saying. In a serious formal way of teaching, the teacher's instructions are usually clear and concise. On the other hand, in an entertaining enjoyable way, students may be more talkative and engaged in activities, which can result in them learning fewer substantive concepts.
Lastly, when students are learning complex subjects, they need to be able to concentrate on the teachings. If there are disturbances or a noisy environment, the effectiveness of the lesson can be compromised.
In conclusion, when learning complicated subjects, it is beneficial to adopt a serious formal way of teaching. Especially when students are motivated, they can learn more effectively through this approach than through an entertaining enjoyable way.
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