Art

posted by .

Ms. Sue, could you please check this part,too? Thank you



1) He explained why he wrote Gomorrah; he did it for the new generations, seeing kids who dream to be a killer, who see in crime the only way of achievement. Boys and girls without hope. He saw his land without a future, where few men control great wealth oppressing poor people stitched up in this system.
2) He felt the impulse to write, to denounce, simply to give hope to the oppressed. Saviano's book also inspired a movie directed by Matteo Garrone that received positive reviews from critics, won the Grand Jury Prize at the Cannes Film Festival 2008 and was chosen as Italy's official candidate for an Oscar.
3) Gomorrah is not only a literary and media phenomenon, it is something more which involves the conscience of the people. Passages from Saviano's book have been read and commented on in schools, during public meetings and demonstrations; his words have become everyone's words.

  • Art -

    1) You have an incomplete sentence here.

    2) A comma is needed after 2008.

    3) OK.

Respond to this Question

First Name
School Subject
Your Answer

Similar Questions

  1. To Ms. Sue

    Ms. Sue, I have to ask for your opinion on this. Which introduction sounds better. I awakened from my dream, and found myself to be sweating. I awakened from my dream sweating. I awoke from my dream with sweaty skin. I awoke from my …
  2. College

    My dream is to go to Harvard University. When I grow up I want to become an artist, & creative writer (like writing stories & stuff. Here are some questions I would like to ask you guys. Please answer these questions please I know …
  3. language art CHECK

    Will somebody please check this for me and see if i used the words correctly please?
  4. Art

    Could you please check this paragraph, Ms.Sue?
  5. English

    1. The kids are excited about seeing their favorite soccer players. 2. The kids are excited about having seen their favorite soccer players. --------------------------------- Question about Sentence 1: Are the kids looking at the players …
  6. Art

    7. Which of the following pairs are art movements?
  7. English

    Can someone please help me answer these questions and check question 1 please?
  8. Art History

    1.which inference can be made of the following statement?
  9. Art History

    what generalization can be made from the following statement?
  10. Art

    Hi, could someone check this for me, thx :) Why is it harder to find examples of 3D art rather than 2d art in early human history?

More Similar Questions