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Is this sentence a run on?

An important decision made by Parvana was when Parvana agreed to go outside to buy food while she was dressed as a boy.

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    No, it's not a run on sentence, but it is awkward.

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    How should I fix it?

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    Use the active voice.

    Parvana made an important decision when she went outside to buy food while she was dressed as a boy.

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    Thank you Ms.Sue

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    You're welcome, Kate.

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