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ms. sue this be for persuasive essay the teacher say to write on one parents/dad or mom and do they be a good parent? what make them good parent? what does job require? why?

i do this one on dad because he make jeanete feel more special, but i not know how to start it out, the thesis i not get.

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    Here's a possibility for a thesis.

    Jeannette's father was a better parent than her mother because he made his child feel special.

    The body of your essay should show examples to prove your thesis.

    After you've written the body of your essay, then write the introduction.

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    Thanks very much ms. sue :)

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