Can you check my poem if it has 10 syllables per line and any other mistake?

and thank you.

You just didn’t know how much I loved you
How hard I tried and you still didn’t know
How close we were was something oh so true
I don’t think it was right for you to go

The things we said we both meant very much
God, you just don’t know how you made me feel
I know soon enough I’ll miss your hands touch
It’s like my heart was yours to go and steal

Can you check my poem if it has 10 syllable per line

Now I have to let go and just forget
It hurts so badly like I’m getting hit
I’ll always remember the day we met
There’ll always be this piece no one can fit

I’ll show you how much I did truly love
And I’ll let you go, be free like a dove.

Ten syllables per line -- all are fine.

... your hands' touch ...

Lots of periods are missing from the ends of sentences. Some commas are missing, too.

You should either leave out all periods and commas ... or put them in all the right places.

vry gud I em in Enlhish techer and this is vry gud werk.

Sure! I can help you check the syllable count of each line in your poem. To do this, we can break down each line into individual words and count the number of syllables in each word.

Let's go through each line and count the syllables:

Line 1: "You just didn't know how much I loved you" - This line has 11 syllables. The word "didn't" has two syllables instead of one.

Line 2: "How hard I tried and you still didn't know" - This line has 12 syllables. Again, the word "didn't" has two syllables instead of one.

Line 3: "How close we were was something oh so true" - This line has 12 syllables. The word "something" has three syllables instead of two.

Line 4: "I don't think it was right for you to go" - This line has 11 syllables. The word "don't" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 5: "The things we said we both meant very much" - This line has 13 syllables. The word "things" has only one syllable instead of two, and the word "both" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 6: "God, you just don't know how you made me feel" - This line has 13 syllables. The word "don't" has only one syllable instead of two, and the word "made" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 7: "I know soon enough I'll miss your hands touch" - This line has 12 syllables. The word "enough" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 8: "It's like my heart was yours to go and steal" - This line has 11 syllables. The word "like" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 9: "Now I have to let go and just forget" - This line has 11 syllables. The word "forget" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 10: "It hurts so badly like I'm getting hit" - This line has 11 syllables. The word "hurts" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 11: "I'll always remember the day we met" - This line has 11 syllables. The word "always" has two syllables instead of one.

Line 12: "There'll always be this piece no one can fit" - This line has 13 syllables. The word "always" has two syllables instead of one, and the word "one" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 13: "I'll show you how much I did truly love" - This line has 12 syllables. The word "did" has only one syllable instead of two.

Line 14: "And I'll let you go, be free like a dove" - This line has 11 syllables. The word "And" has only one syllable instead of two.

Based on the analysis above, it seems that some lines in your poem have more or fewer syllables than the expected 10 syllables per line. Remember, it's important to ensure consistent syllable count in a poem to maintain its rhythm and structure.