Regarding my poem

the teacher doesn't want to follow the traditional iambic pentameter. In this case do you think my poem has 10 syllables per line and funny?

It's all right.

To determine if your poem has 10 syllables per line, you can count the number of syllables in each line. Syllables are the units of sound that make up a word.

Here's how you can count syllables in a line:
1. Read the first line of the poem out loud.
2. Listen for the separate sounds or beats in the words.
3. Each sound or beat usually corresponds to a syllable.
4. Repeat this process for each line, counting the number of syllables in each.

If every line consistently has 10 syllables, then your poem indeed has 10 syllables per line. However, if the syllable count varies from line to line, your poem may not meet the iambic pentameter's requirement of 10 syllables.

As for determining if your poem is funny, that is subjective and depends on the reader's sense of humor. Humor is personal and can vary greatly from person to person. Some people might find your poem funny, while others may not. Consider sharing it with others to get their opinions and see how they react.