i just had a question. if i write down an essay a sort one can someone read it and tell me if its in the level that i want it to be in and/or give me some suggestions on how to improve it? Please answer because im applying for a program and need all the help i can get.

Yeah I can. I am a writer (young) nut I am good at the most part about stuff like that.... i write books, essay, poems, songs, music so i could probably help you. ☺