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I have write a evaluation essay on the movie Troop 1500. So my thesis is -Taking daughters to see their mothers in jail should be a program of it's own.-
I don't know if my topic sentence is correct:

One reason a program should be made separate for daughters who want to reconnect with their mothers is because......

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    That sounds correct to me

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    its (no apostrophe when it doesn't mean "it is")

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