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Judgement : Do you like it, and is it successful?

how well you think you have done with materials used?
is it original, innovative, and daring?
does the artwork make you think beyond the image?
is the artwork successful? how?
do you like artwork? why?
could it be improved?

Pencil was highlight of artwork, in which I be able to produce different shades to bring out and merge my picture. This artwork be innovative because it be something unlike anything ive created before. Artwork makes me think beyond the image because its a representation of life, about people getting dissolved within themselves that they not be able to bring their true self out. I believe this artwork be successful because it appears to be shattered which was main goal. Artwork appears lovely because it touch my soul, its something I thought of never creating, and im so proud of how it came out to be. Shading could be improved, will try to overdo some shading areas.

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    Pencil was the highlight of my artwork, in which I be able to produce different shades to bring out and merge my picture. This artwork is innovative because it is unlike anything I've created before. Artwork makes me think beyond the image because it's a representation of life, about people getting dissolved within themselves that they not be able to bring out their true selves. I believe this artwork is successful because it appears to be shattered which was my main goal. It appears lovely because it touches my soul. It's something I never thought of never. I'm so proud of how it came out. Shading could be improved, and I will try to redo some shading areas.

    You seem to have wonderful insight into art! :-)

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    thank you very much ms. sue for helping :) yeah i love art very much i take it in grade 8,9 10, and 11 :D

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    :-)

    You're very welcome, Mohammad.

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    ms. sue you be able to suggest title for artwork? i thought of shattered cat but that too plain. something that shows that people lose the real themselves.

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    Who Am I?

    Dissolved Within Himself

    I'm sure you can come up with a better title.

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    thanks very much ms. sue :)

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    You're very welcome, Mohammad.

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