Writeacher, I urgently need to email the our partner the following things, to make sure he will make the changes.
1) As there are several pages to check , I won't be able to revise everything by this evening.
2) I made just a few changes in the linguistic objectives, the rationale (last sentence)and the distribution of tasks (F4).
3) I added our part to the "integration into ongoing activities".
4) As soon as I have finished with the revision, I will send you the application again so that you can cut and paste the corrected paragraphs into the original module. There are corrections in each paragraph so you need to cut and paste every single paragraph.
5) If you consider our changes, we are very pleased to start working with you and your school.
1) OK
2) I made just a few changes in the linguistic objectives, the rationale (last sentence), and the distribution of tasks (F4).
3) OK
4) OK
5) OK
Subject: Revision Updates - Urgent
Dear [Partner],
I hope this email finds you well. I would like to inform you about some important updates regarding the current project. To ensure a smooth collaboration and make necessary changes, kindly take note of the following points:
1) Due to the extensive number of pages that require revision, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to complete the entire task by this evening.
2) However, I have already made a few changes to the linguistic objectives, the last sentence of the rationale, and the distribution of tasks, specifically in section F4.
3) Additionally, I have included our part in the "integration into ongoing activities" section, as discussed in our previous meetings.
4) Once I have completed the full revision, I will send you the application again. It is vital that you cut and paste the corrected paragraphs into the original module. Please note that every paragraph contains corrections, so it is important to meticulously cut and paste each one.
5) Finally, I would like to express our enthusiasm to start working with you and your school, should you agree to incorporate our suggested changes.
Thank you for your understanding and cooperation. Should you have any questions or require further clarification, please do not hesitate to reach out to me. I appreciate your prompt attention to this matter.
Best regards,
[Your Name]